Friendly Feedback


May you be enabled
This friendly feedback by
Where you might have limped before
May you learn to fly

Though the information might
Be somewhat difficult to swallow
It comes from authenticity
Not from platitudes all hollow

From the deepest friendship
From genuine concern
That by it you may what will make
Future happiness learn

And after your life gladdened
By mine insight be
I hope that happy heart will still
Have left a little room for me


The poet/editor of this website is physically disabled, and lives at a fraction of her nation’s poverty level. Contributions may be made at:

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